Creation(8)

2:25 PM Unknown 6 Comments

Raag ek naya aaj dil gaa rha hai,
anootha ek naya geet bana raha hai,
sur-saaz mein koi dooba ja rha hai,
kisse poochhu kaun iss dil ko shayar bana raha hai?

6 comments:

vineet said...

ek ghazal hai ye vajib si , kuch yun hi dil se judi hui si lagti hai

kafiya ka mel jol bhi yun hi kar lete hai vo jinke liye kalam ki puja hi bhakti hai

Samir said...

Matter needs to be investigated :)

Reema Jain said...

@Vineet
Thanx bandhu..we have this mutual habit of admiring each other's poetry and shayari

Reema Jain said...

@Samir
No investigations required...M single

Gautam Joshi said...

I am continuing with you Reema...

"me jau jaha bhi....
rasta ruk ja raha hai...
koi milega....koi milega.....
Dil aaj kyun ga raha hai???

Na use hansa tha pahle,
na hamne ishara kiya....
fir bhi yeh REBELIAN dil...
ise PYAR kyun kahe ja raha hai???"

Reema Jain said...

@Gautam:
hey thats really gud.....